The fill in is too strong and take over the beautiful light at the back. (i would did the opposite, put the subjects facing this nice light instead to have it in the back/side of them)
The DoF is too small > the girl is not inside.
I don't like the way you cut the feet of the men and you forget to take off the lens hood which is shadowing the bottom of the picture when you used the flash (or something else shadow their legs)
forum: Critique Corner
I know I am not supposed tor rate the person who rated my photo but whatever, we end up rating each other photo's anyways.
The tree on the left (where her/his right hand is put) I would selectively drop the brightness of it, somehow it competes for my attention from the main focus, the persons.
This 2nd one I know it is subjective matter of taste but I would take the blemishes of the person feet. You probably left them there on purpose but I would personally take them out.
There is a little bit of noise in the background, not sure if you left it there on purpose again ...
Overall a very nice picture, the B&W works very well for this photo. Very nice pose/framing expression capture. Would make a good poster for me (but after at least cropping the spots on legs ).
8.5/10 (would be a 9.5/10 for me with the couple of my preference edits)
For this one, I know technically there is a lot wrong with it (grain, crow underexposed) but I edited the picture this way in post on purpose. I thought this look is good.