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Apr 21, 2015 05:38 |  #1

Rain kept us indoors for this one.
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Apr 21, 2015 05:41 |  #2

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Apr 21, 2015 07:40 |  #3

Ok, my suggestions...

why not clone the upper left corner in #5 because its dark and my eyes are going there?
also the same for #6, to clone out upper right shadow or what's that?

... and maybe in some of the shots to bring down red of her skin a bit?

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Apr 21, 2015 07:52 |  #4

I like no. 2.




  
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Apr 21, 2015 08:05 |  #5

I like the lighting on these a lot and I think you captured her nicely in general. In the shots where there are corners (walls joining) my attention keeps drifting away from the subject and toward the corners. Maybe those shots would have benefited from a shallower DOF or being set against a flat wall?


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Apr 21, 2015 09:13 |  #6

I think in general I find the background in many of these a bit distracting. The last one of the series is my favorite. The background in nice and clean and the reflection in the floor is terrific.




  
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Apr 22, 2015 01:00 |  #7

I agree with previous posts on the sometimes distracting backgrounds, but your model's great smile makes that seem a minor issue to me. Well done!


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May 02, 2015 18:22 |  #8

the background in some of these is a distracting but posing and over all feel is just wonderful




  
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May 06, 2015 13:51 |  #9

They are really well lit just clone out the umbrella? in the upper right corner of #6


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