Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Index  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear  •   • Reviews
Guest
New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear  •   • Reviews
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Visual Enjoyment Fashion, Editorial & Commercial 
Thread started 23 Apr 2015 (Thursday) 12:48
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)

Audrey

 
Dr ­ Lazarus
Senior Member
Avatar
711 posts
Likes: 55
Joined May 2010
     
Apr 23, 2015 12:48 |  #1

I was able to set up a shoot with a model I met at last season's Kansas City Fashion Week. Audrey was great to work with and made my job quite a bit easier (this is my second full shoot and I'm still very much learning the ropes). We were able to work in a few different looks and locations. Constructive C&C are welcome, because I have 2 shoots next weekend and want to make sure I'm always improving.

1.

IMAGE: https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8720/16940705787_fc8a2e2bbc_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/rNZx​Cg  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

2.
IMAGE: https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8801/16537597123_a41e4011cd_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/rcnv​sT  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

3.
IMAGE: https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8698/17167383622_49fda70ec8_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/sa2k​3N  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

4.
IMAGE: https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8820/16992055030_9f965c527a_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/rTwH​Y3  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

5.
IMAGE: https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7622/17210000282_a2b832844a_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/sdMK​uN  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

6.
IMAGE: https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7626/17038158419_acefd856be_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/rXB1​U4  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

7.
IMAGE: https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8818/17037387047_4a8ebf4c5d_c.jpg
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/rXx4​Ax  (external link) Audrey (external link) by eli stack (external link), on Flickr

Flickr (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)
paintedlotus
Senior Member
Avatar
377 posts
Gallery: 2 photos
Best ofs: 1
Likes: 293
Joined May 2008
Location: Seattle, WA
Post edited over 5 years ago by paintedlotus.
     
Apr 24, 2015 00:37 |  #2

Your lighting and toning in post are good. The only nitpicks I have would be for your model to have more connection with the camera (at least one shot of her looking at it would be good) and the lines on the wall intersecting at her head and jutting out the bottom of her chin in the last shot look a little weird to me. Oh, and your watermark/logo is a bit big and distracting but to each their own.

Well done though. :)



Website (external link)

beauty, fashion, model tests, portraits

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
texkam
"Just let me be a stupid photographer."
Avatar
1,437 posts
Likes: 713
Joined Mar 2012
Location: By The Lake in Big D
     
Apr 24, 2015 01:00 |  #3

Solid stuff. Looking forward to more.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Dr ­ Lazarus
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
711 posts
Likes: 55
Joined May 2010
     
Apr 24, 2015 08:23 |  #4

paintedlotus wrote in post #17530280 (external link)
Your lighting and toning in post are good. The only nitpicks I have would be for your model to have more connection with the camera (at least one shot of her looking at it would be good) and the lines on the wall intersecting at her head and jutting out the bottom of her chin in the last shot look a little weird to me. Oh, and your watermark/logo is a bit big and distracting but to each their own.

Well done though. :)

Thanks for the input. I do have quite a few with her making eye contact, but the ones posted were much stronger shots overall. Agreed whole-heartedly on the intersecting lines; I should have cloned them out because I wasn't paying attention enough during the shoot to notice when they became an issue.

texkam wrote in post #17530304 (external link)
Solid stuff. Looking forward to more.

Thanks. I'll probably have some new stuff in a few weeks.


Flickr (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
PhotosGuy
Cream of the Crop
Avatar
75,941 posts
Gallery: 8 photos
Likes: 2577
Joined Feb 2004
Location: Middle of Michigan
     
Apr 24, 2015 09:23 |  #5

Good start with these. Pay a little attention to the tones in her legs, & especially the "Old persons feet" in #1? ; )


FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
Classic Carz, Racing, Air Show, Flowers.
Find the light... A few Car Lighting Tips, and MOVE YOUR FEET!
Have you thought about making your own book? // Need an exposure crutch?
New Image Size Limits: Image must not exceed 1600 pixels on any side.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Dr ­ Lazarus
THREAD ­ STARTER
Senior Member
Avatar
711 posts
Likes: 55
Joined May 2010
     
Apr 24, 2015 13:21 |  #6

Good catch on the feet. It got quite cold toward the end of the shoot and she's quite pale, so yes I probably should have put more work into taking care of the colour difference in post.


Flickr (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
TheLaird
Goldmember
Avatar
2,483 posts
Gallery: 29 photos
Best ofs: 1
Likes: 1051
Joined May 2008
Location: Inverness, Highlands of Scotland
     
May 08, 2015 07:28 |  #7

I prefer the B&W .. they look timeless.


Illegitimi non carborundum --- as they said in Roman times ---

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links
(this ad will go away when you log in as a registered member)

2,107 views & 1 like for this thread
Audrey
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Visual Enjoyment Fashion, Editorial & Commercial 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Index   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.1forum software
version 2.1 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member is leeloming
864 guests, 234 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.