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Apr 26, 2015 08:56 |  #1

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Apr 26, 2015 08:58 |  #2

I think I need a different crop of the first one.. I've removed the jean seam but it still seems 'off'. Thoughts?

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Apr 26, 2015 09:01 |  #3

Honestly, on the first one my eye gets drawn to the creases in the left elbow. Not sure how to fix that.




  
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Apr 26, 2015 10:00 as a reply to  @ WookieeGunner's post |  #4

Hmm... don't think my ps skills are that good! :)

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Apr 26, 2015 16:19 |  #5

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I think I need a different crop of the first one.. I've removed the jean seam but it still seems 'off'. Thoughts?

did you frame the first one loose enough that you could rotate it clockwise?

it's technically a nice enough shot but the pose is awkward. Rotating it would straighten her up and hopefully get some of her leg out of the pic.

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Apr 27, 2015 09:31 |  #6

Unfortunately, I think this is pretty close to the in camera framing. I will explore that though, thanks!

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I know this is old but did you use a flash in this picture? (Her sitting by the water)




  
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Nov 11, 2016 13:58 as a reply to  @ Evertking's post |  #8

Yes, there is an umbrella, camera left, if I recall correctly.

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