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May 02, 2015 10:07 |  #1

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May 02, 2015 10:08 |  #2

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May 02, 2015 11:16 |  #3

Too many shots. Many don't have time to give a detailed critique of so many. So we just move on. Pick your best one or two and you'll likely get more responses.

#1 is the best of the set in my opinion. But it has a yellow cast. You might also consider a square crop. There's a lot of empty space on the sides.

Not sure I like the dark vignette on a few of the others. Ditch #3. Shots of people walking away from the camera are seldom appealing. It looks like your finger blocked the lens in #4. Ditch #6. Too much room on the left side of 7 and 8. The ones without eye contact are not compelling. The light is harsh in many of them. Try shooting at a different time of day or use a reflector or flash fill.

Look a little bit into composition, lighting, and portraiture. There are lots of resources on-line.


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May 04, 2015 13:05 |  #4

I really like #1 and #9. Agree with the above comment on #4...it looks like your finger is in the way and the eyes are not in focus.


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May 07, 2015 17:17 |  #5

#1 and #8 are my favorites of the bunch.

Joe covered the issues in #1 and I think #8 could be improved with some shadow recovery on the right side of the face/hair.

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May 07, 2015 23:05 |  #6

7, 9 and 11 are my favorites, I like the compositions and light!

On almost all of them I think her skin tone is a little off?

Thanks for sharing!


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May 19, 2015 00:52 |  #7

I like 3 and 7 personally




  
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May 20, 2015 09:36 |  #8

some very nice shots here. Tho if I were you, i'd watch the center... the rule of thirds is your friend and some of your images with that in mind stand out way more than the ones where her face is dead center. #1, 9,10,11 are examples of too much centering.


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May 22, 2015 22:24 |  #9

I like #9, centering works well in my opinion, but I would crop a bit of the top so she fills more of the frame.




  
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May 26, 2015 20:09 |  #10

It looks like your really experimented with light and poses good job! That being said she looks a little green in a few especially 4. Maybe tweak WB


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