ugh clearly I suck at night photos... IDK if I'm not in a dark enough area, or if its my editing, I cant seem to find the balance I see everyone else make. any good tutorials anywhere? I've been self taught besides editing methods for photography and I'm just stumped.
The EXIF says you used a 24-105L lens, you can try it again with your 28-70f/2.8L wide open but I agree with Jimmy that you have too much ambient light at that location. There's a lot of glow along the horizon plus I can see some lights on the left hand side in the background. You need really, really, dark skies for this stuff. That said, really like your composition and colorization of your foreground elements.