wallstreetoneil wrote in post #17728639
Excellent picture and processing - 9.75/10
There is one of two things I would do (my opinion) for a 10
- You have a very sharp shadow in her nose and the extremely clean lines and over all processing on the entire image. That sharp shadow in her nose leads me to see that shadow but not the perfect line of lipstick on her upper lip (i'm being very picky here). The lower lip and the upper lip curving into the lower lip is great - almost batman joker like - love it.
- So, either I would soften the line of the shadow in her nose or I would in PS try to apply lip liner to the top part of her lip to give it a sharper edged line more in matching with the rest of the picture
extremely well doneIMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/yDiXJP janette
by Paul O'Neil
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Nice moment, great colours. I bet they enjoyed it In terms of composition I find it more suitable for this kind of shot to shoot it in a landscape mode not portrait one. Why? You have a lot of dark areas in this one and it makes not very much interesting. If you shot it lanscape like, you could have more of your beautiful bokeh in the background and the freshness of the picture and the moment would be enriched. The wall on the left is really ok and the trees behind would deserve a bigger part in your picture. 6/10
To my picture below - I know the perspective is not 100% real. That's a catch bothering me a lot. On the other hand I denied laws of physics and perspective and gave it more advertisement look - so the perspective is interesting for me. You can criticize as u wish. I take everything
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