I like them very much as well. You need to consider doing this full time. One thing I might suggest and everyone has mixed feelings on this, and looking at these should not be an issue, but we never offer our services for co-workers or family. We have done so and it turned out fine, but have heard real horror stories about doing this from others.
On the last one, if that is a blemish on the side of her face and forehead, I would probably take them out and maybe even soften those lines on her neck as well.
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