Hey Richard, I appreciate the feedback, I did miss the converging lines. I'm just starting to get people worked into these shots, so I'm working through the best way to do that. This blurred method is pretty common in architecture photography, so that's what I'm drawing my inspiration from. Of course one still has to get the right balance of blurriness, too much and you can't tell it's a person, and not enough will be distracting. I welcome other opinions on this matter as well.
This is actually not for a realtor, it's for a renovation business, but I should address the profanity for my client. I may obscure one or two of the letters, but I personally like the style. I might see what it looks like without it there at all, good suggestion.
Grab the clone tool > turn both the U and C into O's. Problem solved.