CC appreciated.
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seres Senior Member ![]() 580 posts Likes: 40 Joined Apr 2013 More info | Apr 21, 2016 23:37 | #2 I like this! Nice muted colors, nicely sized out of focus orbs, the main figures are all in focus, and an obvious candle signifying the theme. A good concept carried to a very successful completion. Well done! —Eric
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DThriller Goldmember ![]() More info | Apr 25, 2016 10:45 | #3 A little under exposed and I want you know if Id like it better with the candle framed on the right side just so the flame isn't right next to the hands. http://www.facebook.com/DPhillipsStudios
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mikeinctown Goldmember 2,075 posts Likes: 221 Joined May 2012 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Apr 27, 2016 15:44 | #5 Love the photo and I totally get that dimly lit feel and the personal nature of the tone. Have to agree with the other poster about the location of the candle. Completely distracts from part of the message. Though I might suggest moving it off to the left to the point where you get the flame in the shot, and just to the left of the flame, but not the entire left side of the candle. That would allow you to see both sets of hands in their placement.
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Apr 27, 2016 19:46 | #6 Nice use of the bokeh in the background. I read your comment about the placement of the flame. I didn't see want you wanted me to see initially, but I don't know how I would improve it.
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seres Senior Member ![]() 580 posts Likes: 40 Joined Apr 2013 More info | Apr 27, 2016 19:58 | #7 Interesting comments about the flame… After reviewing this image a few more times, I like the candle flame exactly where it is. I feel that by placing the flame centered in the angle of a triangle formed by their arms, the clutching hands (intimacy) become the focal point. —Eric
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