The items on the near table could have been arranged in a more aesthetically interesting manner. The nearest things on the table - I don't even know what they are. Papers? Handkerchief? Oragami?
Meanwhile, the laptop behind that mess is readily recognizable; it is something that I identify with and that makes sense within the context. So I would have had the laptop positioned in a most advantageous manner, and had "the mess" either removed or moved to the background area behind the laptop. Or better yet, tidy that mess up a bit so that the viewer can easily see just what the items are.
You could even have some fun with the laptop, and get permission to use it so that you can pull up some image or text on the screen that would in some way reinforce the statement that you are trying to make with this image. Of course, any such display could just be edited out if you later decided you didn't like it.
While there are a lot of things I really like about this image, there is no focal point at all. I mean, there is no one place that my eye goes to automatically. My eyes just keep roving around the scene and never really settle on anything. That is one reason why I suggested that the laptop screen be employed more effectively and intentionally, as doing so could provide a much-needed focal point.
"Your" and "you're" are different words with completely different meanings - please use the correct one.
"They're", "their", and "there" are different words with completely different meanings - please use the correct one.
"Fare" and "fair" are different words with completely different meanings - please use the correct one. The proper expression is "moot point", NOT "mute point".