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May 09, 2016 15:47 |  #1

please give me feedback on these. thankyou.


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May 09, 2016 15:54 |  #2

I like the eye contact in #2 and the eyes look good as well. The skin processing (in #2) is a bit strong though and the background a bit busy. The crop on #1 is just off for me. She's a great looking model so enjoy shooting with her.




  
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May 09, 2016 16:12 |  #3

thankyou for the feedback. this was the first time i used this technique to smooth out the skin. ill try tone it back when i do it again.




  
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May 09, 2016 17:37 |  #4

Great start. #1 WB is much too cool especially compared to the second photo.


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May 09, 2016 22:32 |  #5

#1 I'd like to have eye contact with the same pose, the WB is too cool, and I'd desat the reds in her cheeks a bit so it didn't look like overkill with the blush.

#2 The skin is a little to overdone for my taste. The eyes are striking, but just a tad little too much processing (they don't look very natural). Posing wise, play with head positions just to try to reduce/remove neck wrinkles ;)


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May 10, 2016 12:35 |  #6

thankyou everyone for the feedback. i will work harder to better my photos




  
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