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May 13, 2016 19:42 |  #1

Please Critique new photographer here


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May 14, 2016 10:06 |  #2

The white one is an abstract form. So you get to do with it what you want. You might consider cloning out the small blob on the left. I think there's too much open space on the sides and not enough on the top and bottom. If you wanted to print and frame it, you might have trouble not cutting off bits.

The tulip shot suffers from a busy background. The effort to blur it seems to have thrown the flower on the left out of focus. A piece of poster board set behind the subjects would have helped. Or if they were in a pot, simply move them to a place where the background didn't compete for attention. Like the first shot, I think this one would also benefit from a more vertical composition.


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May 15, 2016 19:38 as a reply to  @ joedlh's post |  #3

Thanks again for your input Joe, Very new. Here is another pic of a flower same day. It was taken with a older camera, Since then upgraded with a few more lenses. ;-)a


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May 16, 2016 20:49 as a reply to  @ Kaveka's post |  #4

I think the last pic is over sharpened some. I like the color of them all.




  
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May 27, 2016 20:52 |  #5

Work on your composition

Also your post is overcooked


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May 30, 2016 19:30 |  #6

Very good for a noob :)

Agree with the first comments from Joe.


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