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Softball pic for Prom night.

 
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May 17, 2016 10:16 |  #1

She loves softball. What do you think.




  
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May 17, 2016 18:54 |  #2

I like it .




  
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May 17, 2016 19:23 |  #3

As do I. I can see that on the wall.


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May 17, 2016 20:08 |  #4

I like the concept of the glove, showing her involvement in softball. But I think her pose could be better.

The model is facing the camera squarely, and looking straight into the lens. Her eyes appear lifeless. As a record shot of her involvement in softball, its fine. But without the glove, I think the pose would look awkward.

I would first work to get a flattering pose without the glove. Maybe have the model tilt her head, and work with her to get some life into her eyes. Pretend there will be no other prop, like the glove to hide behind.

Then strategically add the glove.


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May 18, 2016 04:13 |  #5

Thanks!




  
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