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Jun 18, 2016 11:31 |  #1

Let me know what you guys think, this wasn't staged so I can't reproduce it, she was getting ready for the picture.

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Jun 18, 2016 12:05 |  #2

She's lovely, and this is a genuinely candid moment; I like the photo overall. On the other hand, the photo needs a bit more contrast, in my opinion. I wish you were somewhat closer too.




  
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Jun 19, 2016 06:14 |  #3

I think it is a little over exposed and with her dead center and your being too far away it kind of detracts from the picture.


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Jun 20, 2016 12:35 |  #4

@Dillan_K and @saea501, since you both have the same comment for distance, how do you suggest to frame this shot and have the same "effect"? I like the shine on the grass as well as the lit up tree directly behind her. I'd also like to remain as a full body shot as well.

Would this have been better frame?

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Jun 20, 2016 13:30 |  #5

I think it has/had potential. The following are my comments:

* Although I think the girl is exposed well, the environment is just OK. You could fix in PP. Like others said, needs some more contrast.
* I don't like the grass/shrubbery line cutting through her hips at such an angle or at all.
* Edit out the couple of "dots"/bugs that are floating in the image, mostly the one on her left side at elbow height about an arms length away from her.
* I think some traditional rule of thirds would work best here. Keep it landscape but put her on the left side of the image with open space on the right.


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Jun 20, 2016 14:25 |  #6

I'd agree.

Add contrast
Crop so she's on the left third of the frame
Remove some of the highlights in the trees to her left (our right) to remove attention from them

Here you can see the idea I had:

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Jun 20, 2016 14:39 |  #7

Dago...that third image is a nice edit. Not sure there is anything that can be done about the slanting grass line.


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Jun 20, 2016 16:04 |  #8

Thanks guys,
Dago how'd u remove those highlights? That'd be a great technique to have available!




  
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Jun 20, 2016 16:12 |  #9

Just to be clear the first and second are the same image, just masked to show each half compared to the original.

To get rid of the highlights I used the clone brush using content aware.


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Jun 20, 2016 16:18 as a reply to  @ DagoImaging's post |  #10

holy smokes how did i not know about this content aware patch (not sure if it's what you used, but it's doing a fine darn job) Thanks!!!




  
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Jun 20, 2016 23:30 |  #11

The new crop definitely looks much better! :-)


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Jun 27, 2016 11:29 |  #12

Dago, that is a nice edit


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Jun 28, 2016 09:21 |  #13

Crop looks mighty fine :lol:




  
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