First portrait : Meet Jess. C&C are welcome

all of them shot with Canon 5DS-R, Canon 24-105L and Tamron 70-200 F2.8, 2x Yongnuo 600ex-RT, Godox reflector and Neewer 24" Softbox.

Pretty lady. Try to keep the window upright thingy from coming out of the top of her head (first and last pictures).

For portraits I would avoid using strong filters like 2 and 3. Also, avoid the softbox reflection and the window frame growing out of her head #5. And finally if you're serious about portraits you should learn to touch-up skin.

Thank you for your comments. I did the strong filter at the request on Jess. She likes vintage, old, distress look. Yes I do need to learn to do a better job at re-touching skins. It's not my specialty. This was my first adventure into portrait. I was so concern about the light that I forgot to look around the surrounding and made some mistake. Lesson learned I guess.