blkjckss wrote in post #18068242
I like the lighting - subtle and effective. 
twoshadows Liquid Nitrogen  7,342 posts Gallery: 52 photos Best ofs: 19 Likes: 4904 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Between the palms and the pines. More info | Jul 16, 2016 14:26 | #2446 blkjckss wrote in post #18068242 I like the lighting - subtle and effective. xgender.net
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Freakdaddy Member 150 posts Likes: 300 Joined Jan 2011 More info | Jul 17, 2016 10:46 | #2448 Self headshot which is my first ever attempt at any kind of portrait photography. I know there's room for improvement so C&C is welcome. 
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Hinson Goldmember  More info | Jul 17, 2016 11:34 | #2449 Freakdaddy wrote in post #18069495 Self headshot which is my first ever attempt at any kind of portrait photography. I know there's room for improvement so C&C is welcome. Nice shot and not bad at all for a first-time self portrait. A couple of things I would change. 1. Hot spot on background seems a bit too hot. Drop it down a stop and bring color back into the background. Also, lights seem a bit harsh (nose, cheek and forhead hotspots), dial down the exposure a tad. Other than that, great shot. And wow! I love those glasses. At first, I thought you had PSed the lens out for some reason but upon close inspection, I see that there are lens in the glasses. Artist tools: Lumix FZ1000 (Canon 60D, 28/2.8, 10-22mm, Tamron 28-300mm VC ALL NOW FOR SALE - REASONABLE OFFER)
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itsallart Cream of the Crop  More info | I like your the lighting in your shot with no reflections of your eye glasses; I just wish I could see a hairline of the other lens so that the temple doesn't look like it's floating Renata
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Wilt Reader's Digest Condensed version of War and Peace [POTN Vol 1]  More info | Jul 17, 2016 12:13 | #2451 I don't often do headshots. Here are a couple    Apologies You need to give me OK to edit your image and repost! Keep POTN alive and well with member support https://photography-on-the.net/forum/donate.php
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windpig Chopped liver  More info | Jul 17, 2016 14:43 | #2452
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twoshadows Liquid Nitrogen 7,342 posts Gallery: 52 photos Best ofs: 19 Likes: 4904 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Between the palms and the pines. More info Post edited over 7 years ago by twoshadows. | Jul 17, 2016 16:31 | #2453  Image hosted by forum (803780) © twoshadows [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff.  Image hosted by forum (803782) © twoshadows [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. xgender.net
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Jul 17, 2016 16:42 | #2454 Canon 6D and a couple lenses, I don't know... just trying the hardest I can
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Jul 17, 2016 16:57 | #2455 Marie-pier.  Image hosted by forum (803791) © gouf [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Sony A7 II
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Freakdaddy Member 150 posts Likes: 300 Joined Jan 2011 More info | Jul 18, 2016 06:20 | #2457 Hinson wrote in post #18069534 Nice shot and not bad at all for a first-time self portrait. A couple of things I would change. 1. Hot spot on background seems a bit too hot. Drop it down a stop and bring color back into the background. Also, lights seem a bit harsh (nose, cheek and forhead hotspots), dial down the exposure a tad. Other than that, great shot. And wow! I love those glasses. At first, I thought you had PSed the lens out for some reason but upon close inspection, I see that there are lens in the glasses. I appreciate the feedback on this, Hinson as it's greatly appreciated! These are the things I noticed as well so glad I was at least on the same page in identifying the issues in order to correct them in the future. Some of my lighting I have are constant lighting so this along with getting use to using a strobe and OCF will just take experimentation to find that right setting. I look forward to that challenge as it is rather fun using these along with the triggers for the flash lighting.
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Hinson Goldmember More info | Jul 18, 2016 06:59 | #2458 Freakdaddy wrote in post #18070294 I appreciate the feedback on this, Hinson as it's greatly appreciated! These are the things I noticed as well so glad I was at least on the same page in identifying the issues in order to correct them in the future. Some of my lighting I have are constant lighting so this along with getting use to using a strobe and OCF will just take experimentation to find that right setting. I look forward to that challenge as it is rather fun using these along with the triggers for the flash lighting. Thanks for the compliments on the glasses as I just received these. I ordered them through Zenni Optical, on online eyeglass retailer. Not only are they lightweight and stylish, they are also cheap so I was very pleased! No problem, glad to help. Just dialing down the exposure a tad would make the difference. And I just got new glasses but I think I'll check our Zenni just for kicks. I love those glasses. Artist tools: Lumix FZ1000 (Canon 60D, 28/2.8, 10-22mm, Tamron 28-300mm VC ALL NOW FOR SALE - REASONABLE OFFER)
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Jul 18, 2016 13:27 | #2459 I like your shot, but the only thing which bothers me is her left hand. In current framing it looks, as if it wasn't her hand.
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Wilt Reader's Digest Condensed version of War and Peace [POTN Vol 1] More info Post edited over 7 years ago by Wilt. | Jul 18, 2016 13:52 | #2460 Freakdaddy wrote: Hinson wrote in post #18070323 Just dialing down the exposure a tad would make the difference. That photo does not seem too 'hot' to me. You need to give me OK to edit your image and repost! Keep POTN alive and well with member support https://photography-on-the.net/forum/donate.php
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