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May 10, 2017 22:37 |  #1

Thoughts here?

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May 11, 2017 05:51 |  #2

Great shot, apart from that towel on the left.
Definitely don't like the strange tone and lack of contrast, if it's a black dog then it should be black.




  
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May 11, 2017 10:17 |  #3

Wow, the more i look at it, the more i like the image.

I do like the tones, i like how you have an image already with the dog on the floor. Then when you look through the image you either see the towl that compliments the kid, or you see the kid and that gives reason for the towel.

You should also add this to the family photojournalism section of the forums.

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May 11, 2017 10:21 as a reply to  @ Micro5797's post |  #4

I'd probably crop the left and the right a bit since you have good framing there to crop to (the tiled walls). The story is the juxtaposition of the dog and the child, so all else is distracting to me. The liberties you took with the color make it a bit creepy, which I for one, generally like.


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May 12, 2017 22:26 |  #5

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Wow, the more i look at it, the more i like the image.

I do like the tones,

Agree, but I don't care for the tone. Personal preference. I see the reason for blue-ish, IDK.

But yea, it's good IMO.


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May 17, 2017 01:19 |  #6

Thanks all for your feedback. I'll play around with tones and crops...


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May 17, 2017 01:24 |  #7

Here's a little bit different shot

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May 17, 2017 07:20 as a reply to  @ swbkrun's post |  #8

I feel sad I can't see doggo's eyes.


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May 17, 2017 13:14 |  #9

Second is way better image overall and due to disappearance of huge logo in particular. :-P


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May 17, 2017 14:12 |  #10

The color cast, logo and towel are subjective cosmetic issues IMO, and don't interest me in the least. I think both images could have been improved by bumping ISO up in order to use a faster shutter speed. Between the two, I prefer the perspective and framing of the first image, and how that impacts the interrelation between the dog and the child.


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May 19, 2017 12:52 |  #11

I am also leaning toward the first image with a bit more cropped off the right.
It's a good shot!


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May 19, 2017 17:29 |  #12

kf095 wrote in post #18356945 (external link)
Second is way better image overall and due to disappearance of huge logo in particular. :-P


Interesting point, but this raises a new question--- when asking about an edit why does "logo" come into play? Having both photos stolen and published I feel the need to watermark my images. Can't people look past the watermark?

Only asking. No trying to be combative.


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May 23, 2017 12:37 |  #13

Your logo will be no hindrance if someone whats the image. So easy to remove in PP.


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May 24, 2017 05:57 |  #14

Ramon-uk wrote in post #18351738 (external link)
Great shot, apart from that towel on the left.
Definitely don't like the strange tone and lack of contrast, if it's a black dog then it should be black.

I agree, that towel is distracting!




  
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Jun 04, 2017 15:29 |  #15

The first edit is a bit instagramy but not obnotious. Its a cool shot so its ok. When the edit is trying to make up for a bad shot it bad


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