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Apr 27, 2018 01:54 |  #1

Well, there's an article about a girl, who had a porn addiction. She posted about it in IG and as an illustration used image of some fruits and veggies ;]

We continued the vegetable theme :]

P.S. Second one is a portrait I made "on the side".


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Jul 24, 2018 00:07 |  #2

Love the natural lighting and how the light bends around her giving a strong image of depth.

I don't like how the cucumber which is one of the two main subjects intersects with the wire and almost the tape on the back wall. My eyes went:
1. Girl
2. Cucumber
3. Wire
4. Followed the wire out the hatch.

Second photo is likewise breathtaking. Love the way her eyes, teeth and necklace all play together with the white. I don't like how the line in the background is tilted to the side. That's, of course, a style preference but I sort of like it as well because the shot is sort of angled down so it doesn't need a completely lined up aesthetic.

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Jul 24, 2018 00:30 |  #3

You nailed it!

What I especially appreciate is your use of contrast - the juxtaposition of light and dark tones. The two points of interest - her eyes and the cucumber - are also the areas of greatest contrast. This is crucial.

If the thing that you wanted to capture the viewer's interest were not the most contrasty areas in the frame, then it wouldn't work at all. . I know that sounds incredibly obvious, but it is surprising how many photographers do not employ this basic compositional standard.


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