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Sep 05, 2018 15:26 |  #1

Do you think this might be worthy of submission for a greeting card or something?


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Sep 05, 2018 15:36 |  #2

Just one basic point: The horizontal format isn't favorable. Most greeting cards are portrait-shaped.


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Sep 05, 2018 22:01 |  #3

Eye contact would have made this really nice!


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Sep 06, 2018 01:18 |  #4

It's cute. Give it a go. Think of some captions.

He said ....
She said ....


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Sep 08, 2018 11:38 |  #5

Card worthy or not I want that car ߘ


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Oct 18, 2018 15:39 |  #6

Its the rough draft to a better version. Maybe reshoot with softer light and play around with different energy from the kids.




  
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