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Jul 28, 2022 03:37 | #1921 Garry Knight
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mcluckie THREAD STARTER I play with fire, run with scissors and skate on thin ice all at once! 2,192 posts Gallery: 109 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 449 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Hong Kong, Ozarks, previously Chicago area More info | Not sure about letting the eye “explore.” You need something to draw you in, tonality-wise as well, then the eye follows a path. It’s fairly predictable. Too many white corners take you right out of the frame. It’s like what’s the first thing you see, then what’s next, and next… multidisciplinary visual guy, professor of visual art, irresponsible and salty.
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unclejohn Goldmember More info | By making it a comfortable place to explore I mean that, while the eye does have a gestalt view of the whole photo, at the ground level it likes to be presented with easily followable paths (no confusion, no dead ends) to explore whatever it finds interesting. I don't know anything. But I know other things.
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Jul 29, 2022 03:51 | #1925 Garry Knight
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mcluckie THREAD STARTER I play with fire, run with scissors and skate on thin ice all at once! 2,192 posts Gallery: 109 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 449 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Hong Kong, Ozarks, previously Chicago area More info | Jul 29, 2022 08:57 | #1926 unclejohn wrote in post #19409977 By making it a comfortable place to explore I mean that, while the eye does have a gestalt view of the whole photo, at the ground level it likes to be presented with easily followable paths (no confusion, no dead ends) to explore whatever it finds interesting. Exactly my point. multidisciplinary visual guy, professor of visual art, irresponsible and salty.
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unclejohn Goldmember More info | Jul 29, 2022 13:16 | #1927 As long as I give my eye good paths to follow and something interesting to look at, it is happy no matter how crazy the composition. Like in this one (sorry, not a street scene) it knows that there's nothing worth looking at in the big blank area, so it just happily jumps over it from face to face if it doesn't feel like going around. IMAGE LINK: https://photos.smugmug.com …%20roast-1-S.jpg&lb=1&s=AI don't know anything. But I know other things.
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mcluckie THREAD STARTER I play with fire, run with scissors and skate on thin ice all at once! 2,192 posts Gallery: 109 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 449 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Hong Kong, Ozarks, previously Chicago area More info | Jul 30, 2022 11:39 | #1929 unclejohn wrote in post #19410227 As long as I give my eye good paths to follow and something interesting to look at, it is happy no matter how crazy the composition. Like in this one (sorry, not a street scene) it knows that there's nothing worth looking at in the big blank area, so it just happily jumps over it from face to face if it doesn't feel like going around. ![]() I strongly disagree multidisciplinary visual guy, professor of visual art, irresponsible and salty.
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unclejohn Goldmember More info | Good. I was hoping to get people to think about these things and express their opinions. I don't know anything. But I know other things.
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Jul 30, 2022 12:59 | #1931 Tate Modern Image hosted by forum (1171207) © fotoi [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff.
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mcluckie THREAD STARTER I play with fire, run with scissors and skate on thin ice all at once! 2,192 posts Gallery: 109 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 449 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Hong Kong, Ozarks, previously Chicago area More info Post edited over 1 year ago by mcluckie. | Jul 30, 2022 13:36 | #1932 unclejohn wrote in post #19410537 Good. I was hoping to get people to think about these things and express their opinions. Cool. I was afraid to post. multidisciplinary visual guy, professor of visual art, irresponsible and salty.
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unclejohn Goldmember More info Post edited over 1 year ago by unclejohn. | This was a catch-as-catch-can shot. I had no freedom on the point of view, I was sitting on the other side of the table. And there was almost no cropping, I just straightened the frame and took a bit off on the left to reduce the black shadow behind the woman's head. To me the point of this picture is the expressions on the two women's faces. The big blank area doesn't bother me because it is so obviously blank and there is nothing to draw the eye to it. And jumping across it is just another path. I think it is a cute picture, if others think it is poop that's fair. I don't know anything. But I know other things.
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Jul 30, 2022 14:52 | #1934 Image hosted by forum (1171215) © StateOfPlay [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Mark Hawkins
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OhLook insufferably pedantic. I can live with that. 24,807 posts Gallery: 105 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 16147 Joined Dec 2012 Location: California: SF Bay Area More info | Jul 30, 2022 15:06 | #1935 mcluckie wrote in post #19410560 Opinion: I really don’t think it works. The void doesn’t add anything for me. . . . Is the subject a woman or the cash (but the cash is soft)? My eye/brain uses the void as a compositional element. It draws attention because it's unusually large. "The subject"––maybe it's the interaction between the figures, what they're doing, rather than a single visual object. PRONOUN ADVISORY: OhLook is a she. | A FEW CORRECT SPELLINGS: lens, aperture, amateur, hobbyist, per se, raccoon, whoa | Comments welcome
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