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Apr 14, 2007 21:15 |  #1

Hi, my neighbors let me borrow their daughter for some practice shots. She was very easy to work with. Have lots of pics. Just wanted some advice on these. I also have some with the white background kinda like high key I think. But I have not posted them yet.

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Apr 14, 2007 21:56 |  #2

NO commets? Please let me know what you think.

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Apr 14, 2007 22:00 |  #3

Cute, the backdrops remind me of highschool photos. I like the one on the right out of the 2.


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Apr 14, 2007 22:40 |  #4

#2 wins. #1 appears non-flattering. The backgrounds are good, but the background on #2 is really nice.
On #2 her left hand is poorly posed and appears deformed. You might consider turning up and back slightly. Also, I would crop the lower part of the image but leave her hand. Her fishnet stocking is a bit distracting and not enough to be of interest.




  
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Apr 14, 2007 22:41 |  #5

BTW - she is very cute. You should spend as much free time with her as possible.




  
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Apr 14, 2007 22:49 |  #6

gparvan wrote in post #3042642 (external link)
#2 wins. #1 appears non-flattering. The backgrounds are good, but the background on #2 is really nice.
On #2 her left hand is poorly posed and appears deformed. You might consider turning up and back slightly. Also, I would crop the lower part of the image but leave her hand. Her fishnet stocking is a bit distracting and not enough to be of interest.

You don't like #1, really? I like it. I think it's a cute pose.


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Apr 14, 2007 23:08 as a reply to  @ Phil Light's post |  #7

Thanks everyone, thats what I needed some feed back. I think I get to hyper when I am shooting and do not take enough time to look at everything.

Teeny

P.s. The background is a seamless black paper being used with gels.




  
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Apr 14, 2007 23:42 |  #8

I like the first one.

Didn't notice the fishnet until Gparvan mentioned it. I wouldn't think her hand is deformed, either, but amybe have her relax the fingers a bit and let them hang next time.

I agree, spend more time with her.;)




  
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Apr 15, 2007 00:33 |  #9

I like the first one however think the sunglasses loose alot of her face, I would think having her bite the glasses in her mouth a bit and looking up to the camera

However its an interesting pose, would love to see more in the series


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Apr 15, 2007 02:21 |  #10

Cute and sassy!


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Apr 15, 2007 02:37 |  #11

nice shots. I like the first one better. the second I think you could have cropped in closer from the top and I think it could look better if you shot from a higher angle on her so that ur looking down on her. good photos, nice lighting.


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Apr 15, 2007 03:25 |  #12

# 2 is my favorite.




  
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Apr 15, 2007 10:34 |  #13

Phil Light wrote in post #3042680 (external link)
You don't like #1, really? I like it. I think it's a cute pose.

She looks fat in #1, her nose looks bigger, and her lips look flat. The pose is fine, but there is something causing her to distort. In #2 her face is much more appealing. Perhaps its the lens in #1 that is the problem.




  
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Apr 15, 2007 10:46 as a reply to  @ gparvan's post |  #14

Thanks again for everyone's replies. I have lots of pictures of her in different poses etc, might post some more later today. I appreciate all the input.

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