Can you imagine someone printing this and hanging it on the wall of their pub? Me neihter. If you want a piece of art, you'll have to make things make sense. To someone that sees the photo for the first time.
So tell me, what are you doing pressing the wall? Angry? With your hands placed so neatly on the wall and no tense muscles, no veins popping out? Not angry. Desperate? Then what were you doing a second ago and what are you going to do in the next second? It doesn't match for that either. So hey, I guess you just put your cam on a tripod, set the timer, pressed the shutter and looked at the camera, trying to look cool. This is exactly what I see. Perhaps because I'm a photographer myself and perhaps because I've been doing the same thing. But I can tell you this for sure, you can do a much better portrait.
Also, I terribly hate naming my photos, since the title would already point the viewer in some direction and I don't want that.
5D and holy trinity of primes. Now the 90mm TS-E TS-E fly bit me. I hate these forums.