Interview with a vampire

Ok so I get this request from some guy who wants me to take his picture and make him look like a vampire. never done this before, so I call my best friend to practice on and this is what I came up with. I added fangs, dark eyes and other PP

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You could even take it darker, and increase the length of the fangs.
But looks awesome and convincing as it is.

I think you did well! The off-skew angle and (I'm assuming) desaturation really help set the mood.

Just to be awkward (), I thought the fangs were the canines and not the incisors? *Shrugs*

Pretty cool, but I am not a fan of the square crop, I think it would look better as a standard portrait crop.

Definately add length to the fangs and maybe color the eyes red.

Oh no- don't colour the eyes red- I think they're the best bit- very spooky

I like the square crop, and I agree a little more fang length would be good. I know of a tutorial on it, here. Perhaps even add a bit of blod on the corners of the mouth or something? Otherwise, great shot.

looks like a vampire to me

Maybe point his ears a little bit?

thanks for the input and suggestions everybody. ill post a pic of the real deal when im done with the client.

Maybe he should lose the cross

My 2 cents.........
I like the crop, the angle, the desaturation.

The image is lacking in the following, IMHO:
The skin softening doesn't work for me at all. Takes a lot away from the picture. A vampire IMO should have clammy skin, a gritty look.
Did you photoshop the dark circles or did they get smudged during the skin softening?

Maybe try using more harsh lighting.....dark, harsh shadows will emphasize the menacing look.

I like the more subtle fangs - it is more convincing to me.