Hi, I'm a hobby photographer but really interested in photography.
Just took a few shots last week of a friend..
Please post comments so I can learn to do it better..
Thx
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Mikacouli Member 38 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Apr 18, 2009 12:24 | #1 Hi, I'm a hobby photographer but really interested in photography. 2. 3.
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deeslk Senior Member ![]() 566 posts Likes: 1 Joined Oct 2008 Location: Markham, Ontario, Canada More info | Apr 18, 2009 13:39 | #2 Number 2 looks really good, I like the crop Canon 5D MKII Gripped, Canon 7D, Gripped, Canon 50D, Gripped, 70-200 MK II 2.8L IS USM, 24-105 4L IS USM, 70-200 4L IS USM, 17-40 4L USM, 17-55 2.8 IS USM, 50 1.8 II, 3 x 580 EXII, Tokina 11-16 2.8 AT-X 116 PRO DX......
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Phil.hearing Senior Member ![]() 741 posts Joined Mar 2008 More info | Apr 18, 2009 15:02 | #3 picture 1 is too hot in places ...i like picture 3 would look good with some pp Canon 5D MK1 | Holga 120s | EF 24-105mm f/4.0 L IS USM | EF 16 - 35mm f/2.8 L | EF 70 - 200MM F/2.8 USM IS L | Speedlite 580EX II |
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Anke "that rump shot is just adorable" UK SE Photographer of the Year 2009 ![]() 30,454 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Royal Tunbridge Wells, UK More info | Apr 18, 2009 15:03 | #4 You've got a few nice shots there, especially the last one, having a willing model really helps Anke
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Apr 18, 2009 19:44 | #5 deeslk wrote in post #7756366 ![]() Number 2 looks really good, I like the crop How do you know it was cropped and not composed that way at the point of capture? You should really be saying you like the composition and not the crop. It's using photographic terminology better.
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LA Smith Senior Member ![]() 403 posts Likes: 13 Joined Mar 2008 Location: North Carolina More info | No.2 is a very good shot and as stated above the crop works. The first shot doesn't really work due to the extreme tilt and the harsh light. 5D,20D, some lenses and stuff
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Apr 18, 2009 20:52 | #7 HappySnapper90 wrote in post #7757817 ![]() How do you know it was cropped and not composed that way at the point of capture? You should really be saying you like the composition and not the crop. It's using photographic terminology better. Like you said, the photo hasn't been cropped. It's the original picture..
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Apr 18, 2009 20:54 | #8 LA Smith wrote in post #7757876 ![]() No.2 is a very good shot and as stated above the crop works. The first shot doesn't really work due to the extreme tilt and the harsh light. Can the picture be fixed? Cause I like the composition of the photo..
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Nobody has any tips to remove the harsh light or something. I like to see the picture improved. And any tips in pp are welcome!
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lazaro23 Member ![]() 190 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2009 Location: miami More info | Apr 20, 2009 08:27 | #10 removing harsh lighting is extremely diffucult. That why whey i shoot i rather under expose the image rather than to blow out my highlights. Once you blow your highlights there is no way to recover detail. Specially in image 1 the best thing would be to move the subject into a shaded area or try to diffuse the sunlight. I don't thing there is a way to fix image 1 when it come to the lighting composition is good. As far as the rest of the images love #3 her look is stunning with a lil PP that picture is money. =)
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martinsjc Goldmember ![]() 1,410 posts Joined Jan 2007 More info | Apr 20, 2009 08:35 | #11 I like the second one best as well on that one the light looks a bit softer than the others My website:
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matonanjin Goldmember 2,378 posts Likes: 2 Joined Feb 2008 Location: Omaha, NE More info | Apr 20, 2009 08:44 | #12 As others have said, I like comp. in #3. Although, surprising, it looks a tad soft. And #1 is a little hot but what bothers me more is her clawing the tree. My Web Site
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So most people like #3 the most. What can I do to make the photo less soft and maybe there is some work to do on the colors?
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lazaro23 Member ![]() 190 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2009 Location: miami More info | Apr 20, 2009 15:39 | #14 here is a quick literally 3 min edit
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Apr 21, 2009 06:41 | #15 lazaro23 wrote in post #7769334 ![]() here is a quick literally 3 min edit the whites in the BG are blown so no way to get that back but i sort of even out her skin tone with a lil more time a lot more can be done ![]() Yes, it's a lot better now. The image looks more 'real' and sharper.
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