Please Critique !!

Hi just done some minor pp in lightroom as I shot in raw, please let me know what you think ?

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The first one is a classic! Well done!
Where was this shot!? Looks like a beautiful location

beautiful locations, nice sharp images. Well done, the couple looks happy... I'm sure they will be happy with these.

Very nice. If anything 2 could use a tighter crop and 3 could use some fill flash or a local adjustment on the faces.

1 and 4 are just fantastic photos. The guy's outfit is awesome, I dig the pants!

Thank you very much for the comments
,all notes taken and will crop and adjust before delivering. The wedding was quite a low key affair with pic 1 and two just take in the back garden of the registery office in bow, east london. The other pics were shot in afternoon at victoria park, sun was harsh so tried no blue sky at all so just tried shoot around that.

Thank you very much for the comments
,all notes taken and will crop and adjust before delivering. The wedding was quite a low key affair with pic 1 and two just take in the back garden of the registery office in bow, east london. The other pics were shot in afternoon at victoria park, sun was harsh so tried no blue sky at all so just tried shoot around that.

1. Nice shot and I like the confetti!!
2. Good shot but his glasses are distracting to me.
3. I like and I like the shadows on the faces and composition is really good. Only wish the person on camera left (dark dress) was holding the Bride's arm as well, her arm is floating there. (being picky).
4. Best one you posted!!! Good job!!!
5. Is OK.
6. Is OK.

Keep it up!!!

Thank you very much for the comments
,all notes taken and will crop and adjust before delivering. The wedding was quite a low key affair with pic 1 and two just take in the back garden of the registery office in bow, east london. The other pics were shot in afternoon at victoria park, sun was harsh so tried no blue sky at all so just tried shoot around that.

may i ask what were u shooting with..flashes and everything else

I like these a lot. Very well lit with great smiles of happiness.

I must have viewed this album 3-4 times just too look at #1, his wave is just amazing lol. very nicely done.

beautiful set! just one small critique...can you clone out the sign on the bus that says "to rent this bus..."

A classical set of pictures which does the job of telling their story.

Great work!!

Is the bride Thai or Laos? Love the attire!

Nice work. I really like the first shot you've posted.