DigitalSpecialist Goldmember  2,286 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2008 Location: Finding a New World, thru my camera More info | May 18, 2009 17:43 | #16 Aleks, my only critique would be to #4. I would have turned the bouquet so that the stems were hidden behind the flowers. Everything else looks really good and your WB is really on through all your photos. #3 is a great series within itself. Nice work!!! JIM
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augum Member 189 posts Joined Jun 2006 More info | I think these are GREAT shots. Great color and nice sharp images. I think you do rock atwitchell.smugmug.com
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brennasg "Late to the party!"  1,246 posts Joined Apr 2009 More info | May 18, 2009 20:31 | #19 Bob_A wrote in post #7944765  You've posted some terrific images. The only cc I can offer is: #2 is a bit too centered for me. I'd rather see a crop with a bit removed from the left and bottom. #3 Use the vertical mutton bars in the window as a guide and make sure the horizon is identical for each image in the series. #4 looks like the horizon is off just a bit. I'd also like to see what it would look like with a bit more vignetting. #5 has her head a bit too centered IMO. I'd like to see what it would look like with some of the space removed from the top and left. I totally agree with all of this Franklin Tn Baby Photographer
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knight2870 Member  119 posts Joined Apr 2009 More info | 1 and 6, Nice, really like 1 400D, 75-300mm f/4-5.6 III, 50mm f/1.8 II, two 580ex II's. A mix of studio lights, gadgets, backdrops, blah blah blah.....
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May 18, 2009 22:25 | #22 I'll tell her that people like them because she was all WORRIED about not giving me good pictures Rock my blog
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bennyg Member 248 posts Joined Apr 2008 Location: northern beaches, sydney australia More info | May 19, 2009 05:03 | #23 really like 1 and 4.. benny g
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butugly Senior Member 621 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: chelmsford,essex.UK More info | May 19, 2009 05:32 | #24 sorry not a pro but photos of the beutiful young lady laying down on her back is not very flattering,tends to make the face much fatter-chubbier than it is,also the 2nd from last photo with her partially lifting her head makes the face distort on the right side as you look at the photo only minor things to an otherwise nice set of photos.hope this helps.
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superstes Goldmember  1,376 posts Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: Southern France More info | May 19, 2009 14:41 | #25 Nice work, some good advice already given above.
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May 20, 2009 08:11 | #26 True...I didn't even notice that until now Rock my blog
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wrussi Senior Member 788 posts Likes: 2 Joined Dec 2007 Location: miramar FL More info | May 20, 2009 14:33 | #27 i think 4 would look better with a stronger vignette and some color changes? Gear List
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RuthNaomi Member  136 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2007 Location: Lincoln, Ca More info | May 27, 2009 00:39 | #28 These are very nice and well executed. But I dont think 5 is a very good angle for her.
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