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Shots of JaySilva

 
Sevillian
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Jun 14, 2009 23:55 |  #1

Here are a few shots I took of my music producer JaySilva.

Any feedback would be appreciated.

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Karl ­ Johnston
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Jun 15, 2009 02:03 |  #2
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1: I think the trees and the bright greens interrupt the balance of this shot. A crop would be useful.
2: Looks okay,
3: I would delete this one, it doesn't look like a keeper at all. Too much chroma on his face and there's too much negative white space coming from the left.
4: I think this needs a crop from the right about 25%, to isolate him on the streets more and emphasis his person.
5: I'm not really a fan of this.
6: I'm not a fan of this one either. It feels too much like a snapshot and his expression isn't very compelling.
7: I think the eyes need to be brightened up (got photoshop? Dodge tool works wonders for that). Set it at a low opacity and the mode for "highlights" in the toolbar. Soft circular brush to bring back the irises.
8: I like this one the best


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Sevillian
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Jun 15, 2009 11:01 |  #3

Thanks for your input Karl.




  
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