First group shoot.

Went on a group shoot at the weekend and here is a few of the editted ones.

Any constructive C&C?

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Very, very nice, you did well on this set.

Cheers Ralph

what? nothing else? they that boring?

The first is the best.
I don't like the model posing.

i like the concept of 1, 2, & 3 but they look underexposed to me, and the colors could pop alot more.

not a fan of #4

Edit: Since you have image editing on, i took it upon myself to show you wht i mean, about 10 seconds in photoshop. just adjusted the levels a bit

Yours

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I like them, i just dont understand the poses. 2 and 3 seem very unnatural... but not in a hot fashion way. what were your thoughts?

To my inexpert eye, #2 and #3 look like they may have been better shot from a slightly lower viewpoint...

The first one is the best in my opinion. The poses look awkward and the last one she looks concerned.

not a huge fan of some of the poses either. Next time I think I will be more confident and pose the model myself.

Agree with comments on the colours, especially after seeing an example!

Phil