My Fiance

My Fiance, enjoying Disney's Nemo aquarium

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Its a little underexposed. I would also like to see what see is looking at...I think if you would have gotten a little more behind her and further away it would have made for a better shot

It is a little underexposed and lacking in contrast.

PS You need another "e" on the end of Fiance, that is the masculine spelling.

Since you shot this @ f1.8 it appears her ear is in focus but her eye is not. I'd rather the eye be in focus.

I dont think this is a flattering facial expression for her.

would have liked to see less forehead to allow more chin room. her expression communicates the opposite of enjoyment IMO. You also have her splitting the frame, try framing her the right right more.

thanks for the tips. will have to retry when i see her again (Very long distance relationship, she is in FL and im in the UK)

As for the expression i took this photo of her when she wasnt paying attention as she is camera shy and i have to get "candid" photos