Senior Photos - Elizabeth

Skin tones. The skin tones look good on #3 and #5, but not on the last one. The last one looks too "cold" lacking red.

You have an improperly positioned kicker light on images 1,3,5 and 7. Look at her nose on these images. It appears to be huge. Now look at her nose in image # 2 to see what her real nose looks like. Now you see why it is important not to allow the kicker to illuminate the side of her nose. It should graze her hair only.

Now if she doesn't mind having a nose that looks like a banana, don't fix the kicker.

Benji

Nice collection of shots thanks for sharing, number 2 is by far the best one in my opinion.

Benji wrote in post #8604859
You have an improperly positioned kicker light on images 1,3,5 and 7. Look at her nose on these images. It appears to be huge. Now look at her nose in image # 2 to see what her real nose looks like. Now you see why it is important not to allow the kicker to illuminate the side of her nose. It should graze her hair only.

Now if she doesn't mind having a nose that looks like a banana, don't fix the kicker.

Benji

wow, this guy is good ... and painfully CORRECT!!! Lesson learned.

dave

snyderman wrote in post #8605111
wow, this guy is good ... and painfully CORRECT!!! Lesson learned.

dave

Dave,

We usually learn how to create better images by shooting something, then posting it so others can offer their critique. After a number of comments are made the maker can either get all prideful from the well wishers and think he has arrived, or weed out all the "well dones" "great shots" and "excellent images" comments and focus on the one or two negative comments. Then see if the negative comment(s) are legit or sour grapes. If legit then do something to correct it and become a better shooter.

Benji

nice work! you think she would have a different smile/face on her part.

fantastic senior work!

Great DOF, and shots! I feel the the last 2 shots the skin needs to be warmed up a little. Great photos!

Benji wrote in post #8604859
You have an improperly positioned kicker light on images 1,3,5 and 7. Look at her nose on these images. It appears to be huge. Now look at her nose in image # 2 to see what her real nose looks like. Now you see why it is important not to allow the kicker to illuminate the side of her nose. It should graze her hair only.

Now if she doesn't mind having a nose that looks like a banana, don't fix the kicker.

Benji

I appreciate the critique. Thanks for the insight.

Like 1 and 2. Number 4 the arms seem a tiny bit ackward. Good stuff.