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Sep 08, 2009 08:56 |  #16

Skin tones. The skin tones look good on #3 and #5, but not on the last one. The last one looks too "cold" lacking red.




  
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Sep 08, 2009 09:57 |  #17

You have an improperly positioned kicker light on images 1,3,5 and 7. Look at her nose on these images. It appears to be huge. Now look at her nose in image # 2 to see what her real nose looks like. Now you see why it is important not to allow the kicker to illuminate the side of her nose. It should graze her hair only.

Now if she doesn't mind having a nose that looks like a banana, don't fix the kicker. :)

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Sep 08, 2009 10:00 |  #18

Nice collection of shots thanks for sharing, number 2 is by far the best one in my opinion.


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Sep 08, 2009 10:36 |  #19

Benji wrote in post #8604859 (external link)
You have an improperly positioned kicker light on images 1,3,5 and 7. Look at her nose on these images. It appears to be huge. Now look at her nose in image # 2 to see what her real nose looks like. Now you see why it is important not to allow the kicker to illuminate the side of her nose. It should graze her hair only.

Now if she doesn't mind having a nose that looks like a banana, don't fix the kicker. :)

Benji

wow, this guy is good ... and painfully CORRECT!!! Lesson learned.

dave


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Sep 08, 2009 11:50 |  #20

snyderman wrote in post #8605111 (external link)
wow, this guy is good ... and painfully CORRECT!!! Lesson learned.

dave

Dave,

We usually learn how to create better images by shooting something, then posting it so others can offer their critique. After a number of comments are made the maker can either get all prideful from the well wishers and think he has arrived, or weed out all the "well dones" "great shots" and "excellent images" comments and focus on the one or two negative comments. Then see if the negative comment(s) are legit or sour grapes. If legit then do something to correct it and become a better shooter.

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Sep 08, 2009 17:00 |  #21
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nice work! you think she would have a different smile/face on her part.




  
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Sep 09, 2009 02:20 |  #22

fantastic senior work!


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Sep 09, 2009 10:53 |  #23

Great DOF, and shots! I feel the the last 2 shots the skin needs to be warmed up a little. Great photos!




  
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Sep 10, 2009 22:07 |  #24

Benji wrote in post #8604859 (external link)
You have an improperly positioned kicker light on images 1,3,5 and 7. Look at her nose on these images. It appears to be huge. Now look at her nose in image # 2 to see what her real nose looks like. Now you see why it is important not to allow the kicker to illuminate the side of her nose. It should graze her hair only.

Now if she doesn't mind having a nose that looks like a banana, don't fix the kicker. :)

Benji

I appreciate the critique. Thanks for the insight. :)


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Sep 10, 2009 22:41 |  #25

Like 1 and 2. Number 4 the arms seem a tiny bit ackward. Good stuff.


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