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Sep 14, 2009 18:25 |  #1

Tell me what you think


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Sep 14, 2009 18:34 |  #2

good shot. I wish you had the feet in the upper third though. more grass in the bottom. that's just me though


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Sep 15, 2009 10:26 |  #3

a bit oversaturated? I don't know. Something about the composition bugs me too, but it's hard to tell because the image is bigger than my computer screen.


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Sep 15, 2009 11:09 as a reply to  @ lookingforaname's post |  #4

Maybe it would have worked better with the kids laying down.my eye is drawn to the torsos...[the white t's are bright]


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Sep 15, 2009 11:11 |  #5

I'd crop out the portion above the waist and leave just the feet. The skin tones are over cooked (too much contrast/saturation). I'd adjust the curves to bring out more natural tones.


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Sep 15, 2009 14:04 |  #6

Ok thanks for the replies


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Sep 15, 2009 15:19 |  #7

How about this one


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Sep 15, 2009 16:27 |  #8

i like the concept. keep playing with it. but, cut that one stray grass blade off to match the rest of the lawn.


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Sep 16, 2009 12:40 |  #9

Much better


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Sep 16, 2009 13:53 as a reply to  @ GorgeShooter's post |  #10

I'd say the left side makes my eyes bug out. Perhaps crop out the empty space on the right.


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