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Oct 16, 2009 10:25 |  #1

Hello everyone, It's been a while since I've been on this board or had anyone critique my photos, since the end of august actually. For the last month and a half i have lived in Pamplona, Spain, and it's really beautiful here. I think its time for me to get some more feedback on my photos, this board really help me get a start on my photography. Keep in mind that I only have 2 months with my G10, so tear my photos apart as much as possible so I can learn some more. Thanks.

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These are completely unedited since my computer is a netbook here (a crappy one), I think they benefit from a darker backround (I like tem better in my photo blog).

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Oct 16, 2009 16:16 |  #2

The first shot is too dark for me. Try to get a more even balance between natural light and the artificial light in any night scene.

The second scene needs a broader field of view for me. I want to see more of the building - both to the left and higher. The other side of the frame ends about right

I can't find my way around the third scene, so I gave it a pass.


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Oct 19, 2009 13:46 as a reply to  @ Robert_Lay's post |  #3

the 3rd shot looks somewhat confusing, fragmented... i dont know where to focus




  
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Oct 19, 2009 14:43 |  #4

Your composition is nice to me. I wish photo 1 was taken with a longer exposure. And no 3 is great to me. So I dont know what everyone else is talking about.




  
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Oct 19, 2009 19:38 |  #5

i figured the object of the first shot would be to have the statue in focus and have your dof run out to infinity. the statue looks soft to me.


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Oct 20, 2009 15:02 |  #6

I love the second one. It just appeals to me.


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