Hedley wrote in post #9194674
Thanks - I think your rewording is spot on, and I will change it
p.s. The lemurs pic wasn't meant to be funny. It's a mother carrying her baby, but if that's how it comes across I will look at that again as well.
To my mind there's actually a couple more little bits in the rest of your text that need fine tunning as well. Take it with a pinch of salt but i would remove the red text. Sometimes like they say... less is more..
"(Our)His aim, (is always) to produce (top) beautiful images (quality results) through an unobtrusive and relaxed style, (so) whether (it's is guests at a wedding, the bride and groom, a family portrait, a fashion shoot,) a wedding party, family portrait or a band onstage, James's shooting style (it's always shot in such a way that) will (keeps) ensure the subjects remain as relaxed and natural as possible.
In 2009 James's (was also recently) photography was recognised and (recently been) awarded 2 prizes by renowned manufacturer of photography(camera bags and accessory cases) equipement (Lowe Pro). (,as well as being)
James's work (and) is a regulary published being featured in (contributor to a number of) publications such as YouGotPapped Magazine
2010 promises to be an exciting year for us, as we're booked for our the first overseas wedding and we plan to continue growing and providing more services"
With event's including his first oversea's wedding, 2010 promises to be another busy and exciting year for James.
The bit about more services also highlights new to the game.
Canon 5D MarkII, 40D, 350D, EOS100, G10. Canon 24-105 F4 L, 85mm, 400mm F5.6, 50mm F1.8, 18-55mm, Sigma 10-20, 100-300mm, Canon 28-105 F3.5-F4.5, Kenko x1.4, Tubes and a bunch of Elinchrom Lights, flashes, reflectors and triggers.