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Dec 27, 2009 15:27 |  #1

Just wanted to post this snowmen picture for some c&c Thanks

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Dec 27, 2009 15:28 |  #2

what do you want us to Critique? lighting? subject?


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Dec 27, 2009 15:30 |  #3

I thought "OK, nice shot" until I scrolled down and got to the foreground clutter. Crop/clone that out and you have a nice, decorative Christmas shot. Not all images need to be 3x4


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Dec 27, 2009 15:30 |  #4

Very sharp image. Looks very cozy, somewhere I'd like to be




  
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Dec 27, 2009 15:46 |  #5

canonnoob wrote in post #9271578 (external link)
what do you want us to Critique? lighting? subject?

Lighting, Image Quality, picture sharpness.

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Dec 27, 2009 15:49 |  #6

Thumbsup wrote in post #9271589 (external link)
Very sharp image. Looks very cozy, somewhere I'd like to be

Thank you I was looking for C&C on sharpness. and it is a very nice place to be.

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Dec 27, 2009 16:25 |  #7

Amarinelli wrote in post #9271662 (external link)
Thank you I was looking for C&C on sharpness. and it is a very nice place to be.

Alan

The lighting looks very natural as well. Good job




  
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Dec 27, 2009 16:27 |  #8

Thumbsup wrote in post #9271839 (external link)
The lighting looks very natural as well. Good job

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Dec 27, 2009 16:37 as a reply to  @ Thumbsup's post |  #9

It looks acceptably sharp and lighting is ok. Unfortunately the poor composition relegates this to nothing more than a snapshot.


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Dec 28, 2009 03:23 |  #10

crashthenet44 wrote in post #9271925 (external link)
It looks acceptably sharp and lighting is ok. Unfortunately the poor composition relegates this to nothing more than a snapshot.

I was under the impression this was the place to go when 'practicing' different techniques, not neccessarily posting only wall-hanging products. If we are not allowed to post snaphots for c&c we are all in trouble.




  
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Dec 28, 2009 03:40 |  #11

Thumbs Up, What Crash the net posted WAS c&c. We are not sure what technique you were practicing but I agree that because of the composition - what you got was a snapshot. If you post in critique corner then it is silly to get upset if people critique your images.




  
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Dec 28, 2009 03:41 |  #12

It's hard for the viewer to see what the subject is since for there's too much going on. Also, the subject doesn't pop more than it's surroundings which adds to the confusion. Easy way to help the viewer lead they're eye to the subject is to add some amount of vignetting.

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Dec 28, 2009 05:11 |  #13

Bobinpeterboro wrote in post #9274580 (external link)
Thumbs Up, What Crash the net posted WAS c&c. We are not sure what technique you were practicing but I agree that because of the composition - what you got was a snapshot. If you post in critique corner then it is silly to get upset if people critique your images.

It's not even my image. I'm merely pointing out the person who started this thread asked for comment on lighting and sharpness, not composition. The "snapshot" remark seemed to nitpick and that is not what the forum was intended to be either. I just wanted to show some support.




  
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Dec 28, 2009 05:19 |  #14

By looking at the gallery on your website and at your list of gear, this doesn't look like a shot i would expect you to compose.


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Dec 28, 2009 05:19 |  #15

Oops. My Bad. But I still hold that posting in this thread is (or should) be a genuine request for criticism and that is the only way we will improve as photographers. I believe that the "snapshot" comment related to the fact that not much thought had gone into the picture. I have had that comment leveled at some of my pictures in competitions and after discussion with the judge I discovered ways to make my pictures better. Another damning comment I have recieved in the past is "This is a lovely record shot". This also indicates not enough thought went into the picture before I took it




  
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