First of all, great work. All the pics are first rate. IF I had to choose, it would be #1. The rain works and adds a layer of "story" and ambiance to picture. It makes the original less interesting in comparison. Having said that, I too am a sucker for pupils. When I looked at #3 which I'm assuming is closer to "as shot," I was immediately drawn to her eyes. Maybe you could retrieve some of that lost detail in the eyes by using an exposure brush and a slightly less aggressive tone curve without losing that grungy feel. Just a thought if I had to nitpick. Honestly, your pics here are better than any HDR I've done so take my suggestions with a grain of salt.