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Mar 05, 2010 14:53 |  #1

What would you do to this picture to make it better? As far as the bluish tint goes, she is kind of a blue dog. Other than that, I really like this picture, but I feel that it is lacking...


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Mar 05, 2010 15:01 |  #2

Or should I try to fix this one, instead? (aside from head positioning, this one focused more on her head, and the previous is focused more on her body- just in case that wasn't obvious)


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Mar 05, 2010 15:13 |  #3

Hey Whilrigig As far as shot goes I like #2 with the focus on the head, I'm left to wonder how this would look as a high contrast Black and White, not at home right now or I would try it.




  
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Mar 05, 2010 15:17 |  #4

any better?


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Mar 05, 2010 15:22 |  #5

Ok I forgot I had gimp on my work computer and I'm bored on a conference call so here goes:

this is about 10 mins of work but let me know what you think.


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Mar 05, 2010 15:24 |  #6

I made one more edit where I faded the line in the back ground:


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Mar 06, 2010 13:26 |  #7

I like the diagonals in this one, it makes a firm statement. Wipe off the eye goobers next time.


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Mar 06, 2010 15:01 |  #8

jack lumber wrote in post #9741115 (external link)
I like the diagonals in this one, it makes a firm statement. Wipe off the eye goobers next time.

i wanted to wipe off the "goobers" so badly... but this was just a happenstance photo opp. she would want to play or end up moving if i tried to wipe her eye boogers away!




  
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