Jerk.photo Senior Member 448 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: I hail from the great state of O-H-I-O. More info | Feb 14, 2011 03:11 | #1   _MG_8852 by slammed4thgen, on FlickrI had to edit in iphoto because my lightroom 3 trial expired but I have the full version on the way! I just wanted to see if im improving at all, last posting was bad lol. Thanks guys, I love to hear what you think! tamron 28-75 2.8 on 5dmkII. single strobe, b800 camera left. ** Well I already picked something out I hadnt seen... only one eye is in focus. Grr. Gripped 5D Mark II l 100L l PCB b800 l Vagabond II l Lumopro LP160 x3 l
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Feb 14, 2011 08:50 | #2 First thing I noticed is that his neck is much whiter than his face. Necks are usually a little darker being in facial shadow or the same tone. Your main light was probably too low. I'd try to fix that in pp. Otherwise nice portrait. -- Image Editing OK --
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Jerk.photo THREAD STARTER Senior Member 448 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: I hail from the great state of O-H-I-O. More info | Feb 14, 2011 09:14 | #3 Qbx wrote in post #11840114 First thing I noticed is that his neck is much whiter than his face. Necks are usually a little darker being in facial shadow or the same tone. Your main light was probably too low. I'd try to fix that in pp. Otherwise nice portrait. Ohh good call. Thanks! Keep them coming! Gripped 5D Mark II l 100L l PCB b800 l Vagabond II l Lumopro LP160 x3 l
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CrystalWPhotography Senior Member  500 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jan 2011 Location: PA More info | Feb 14, 2011 09:32 | #4 I think it would look better if it was portrait. Crop some of the white space, (unless you plan to put words over there). Like it was mention, neck is brighter then the face. I'm not crazy about the hat being cropped off. I do like it in B&W, nice touch. Crystal
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Jerk.photo THREAD STARTER Senior Member 448 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: I hail from the great state of O-H-I-O. More info | Feb 14, 2011 15:38 | #5 Crystal W Photography wrote in post #11840330 I think it would look better if it was portrait. Crop some of the white space, (unless you plan to put words over there). Like it was mention, neck is brighter then the face. I'm not crazy about the hat being cropped off. I do like it in B&W, nice touch. Here is a portrait video on tips for lighting.Thank you crystal, I appreciate it Gripped 5D Mark II l 100L l PCB b800 l Vagabond II l Lumopro LP160 x3 l
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