The truck shoot turned out better because of the location. It's a tough truck in a tough environmental scene. Just what you'd expect to see. Nicely done, except for the dirty snow image.
The Edge shoot looks goofy because of the BGs. Especially the last one, that basketball hoop and pole are not great. And all the empty trees, partial snow and chain link fences are very distracting. I know if you had your choice you'd love to do this in the summer, but they need the shots now. I do like the colors of the dragon wall in the last shot, but agin, the half snow, half dead grass is funky. Tough time of the year to shoot outside shots.
I too am working with a local Ford dealership. We are working on getting some new shots of the "Car Candy" line of tarted up Mustangs and Shelby's that they do. I work on the TV spots, but the woman in charge of advertising knows I shoot stills and has asked me to see what can be done with scenes around the dealership as well as looking into going to an off site studio location where I can totally control the light and reflections.
Good luck with the paid gig!