I took the advice from my last post about some things I could improve on. I hope these turned out better. As always, C&C welcomed.
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Solo87 Senior Member  345 posts Joined Feb 2010 Location: Northern IL More info | Feb 16, 2011 01:53 | #1 I took the advice from my last post about some things I could improve on. I hope these turned out better. As always, C&C welcomed. | BJ |
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Grimlock Goldmember  2,912 posts Joined Dec 2008 Location: Southern California Origin: Cybertron More info | Feb 16, 2011 02:10 | #2 These are all great and wonderful shots. My favs are #2 and the last. - Jerry | Zenfolio
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jenirose3 Goldmember  1,268 posts Joined Jun 2006 More info | Feb 16, 2011 08:47 | #3 I think you did a great job. The one CC I will mention is the lens distortion in the first shot with the purple hat. The angle with the pom poms makes the baby look teeny teeny and the hat look huge! Jeni
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Feb 16, 2011 08:54 | #4 jenirose3 wrote in post #11853898  I think you did a great job. The one CC I will mention is the lens distortion in the first shot with the purple hat. The angle with the pom poms makes the baby look teeny teeny and the hat look huge! I see what you mean. What can I do to remedy that. | BJ |
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kendi4 Member 117 posts Joined Oct 2010 More info | Feb 16, 2011 13:24 | #5 These really look great. I would be very happy if this was my daughter and you presented me with these pictures. I agree with the CC about the hat...I also think it would have been better to have the pompoms in focus, but if they were moved, then maybe that would just happen anyway. ~Kari
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MsWG Member  68 posts Joined Jan 2009 Location: Wonderful Wales More info | Love number 3, with her tongue sticking out From the etching of daybreak to the canvas of moonlight - pw picadilly trail
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jenirose3 Goldmember 1,268 posts Joined Jun 2006 More info | Feb 16, 2011 14:00 | #7 Solo87 wrote in post #11853946 I see what you mean. What can I do to remedy that. Not sure you can do anything in post about it now because it's mainly caused by lens distortion from the angle and distantce from the subject. It's something you have to remember for next time. What I would do [If you really want to include it in the proofs] is a recrop in landscape maybe an inch or two below the arm. Jeni
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Feb 16, 2011 14:11 | #8 jenirose3 wrote in post #11855780 Not sure you can do anything in post about it now because it's mainly caused by lens distortion from the angle and distantce from the subject. It's something you have to remember for next time. What I would do [If you really want to include it in the proofs] is a recrop in landscape maybe an inch or two below the arm. You have a similar issues in #6 with the pink fuzzy blanket although not as bad and distracting. It's almost fisheye-ish. Maybe if I had a 50mm it wouldn't do this...or would it | BJ |
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suecassidy Goldmember  4,102 posts Likes: 36 Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California More info | Feb 16, 2011 16:57 | #9 2&7 are my favs. AWESOME, complete and yummy perfection! Congrats, she is beautiful and your work is terrific. Sue Cassidy
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RazorbackSam Senior Member 353 posts Joined Mar 2010 Location: Arkansas More info | Feb 16, 2011 22:56 | #10 Some great ones... would you mind sharing some setup info on #5... I am curious how to ge the backdrop, baseboard, and false flooring to look like a wall and floor.... thanks! [Canon 7D | 24-70mm 2.8 L | 70-200mm 2.8 IS L | 18-135 3.5~5.6 IS | 28mm 1.8 | 50mm 1.8 | Manfrotto 055XPROB Legs - 222 Head | Manfrotto 060B MonoPod
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jesyjames02 Member  43 posts Joined Jun 2010 More info | Feb 16, 2011 23:02 | #11 Well, I think you succeeded. My first reaction was a smile.
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gogators Member  63 posts Joined Aug 2009 More info | Feb 17, 2011 07:42 | #12 Awesome job. It may be my iPad, but is #7 a little on the cool side? Flickr
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Feb 17, 2011 08:33 | #13 RazorbackSam wrote in post #11859001 Some great ones... would you mind sharing some setup info on #5... I am curious how to ge the backdrop, baseboard, and false flooring to look like a wall and floor.... thanks! Here's an unedited shot of my setup. I use background stands to support the vinyl. Then all I do is clamp the baseboard or in this case, I use crown molding to the vertical vinyl.  | BJ |
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Grimlock Goldmember 2,912 posts Joined Dec 2008 Location: Southern California Origin: Cybertron More info | Feb 17, 2011 09:46 | #14 Thanks for the pullback shot. The thought never crossed my mind to use flooring tiles. Great idea. - Jerry | Zenfolio
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Skrim17 The only TPBMer without a title. Enjoying my anonymity.  40,070 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2006 Location: In my tree More info | Feb 17, 2011 09:50 | #15 So the backdrop and the flooring are actually two separate backdrops? interesting. Crissa
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