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Feb 17, 2011 04:18 |  #1

I would appreciate your thoughts with this picture and ways to improve it, I am relatively happy with the result but for me there is something wrong and I cannot put my finger on it...

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Feb 17, 2011 04:23 |  #2

Cool photo but if you're specifically looking for something negative about it i would say that it would work better ( for me atleast ) if the subject was at the center of the picture rather then slightly at the right side and the orange that is being squeezed is a tad too bright.


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Feb 17, 2011 07:42 |  #3

I think it looks great but like Repo man mentioned, crop the pic so its centered


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Feb 17, 2011 08:20 |  #4

it's a little too overexposed to me or maybe dial in a little more contrast on the orange. the stem of the glass is blending in with the background.


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Feb 17, 2011 09:28 |  #5

Center the glass and it's a little over exposed. Yes, stock images are suppose to be bright, but this one is a tad over. The orange is almost to the point to losing detail.


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Feb 17, 2011 10:09 |  #6

I would like to have seen some juice dripping OUT of the orange and down into the glass, in addition to the splash that is jumping up and out. Still, I like it.


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