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thinkjasonacton Junior Member  25 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Dallas, Tx More info | Feb 19, 2011 03:03 | #1 Critique please! HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Nightlife | Editorial | Lifestyle | Events
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Albertonman Senior Member  419 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2010 More info | Feb 19, 2011 03:40 | #2 I like it, my only critique would be that I would have stepped back a little bit as it seems tight, also you dont see that headstone on the right properly and the shadows are a bit too dark, and maybe the flare is a bit too bright, but that is only based on personal prefs.
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BlakeinatorMate Senior Member  438 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2011 Location: Australia More info | Feb 19, 2011 03:47 | #3 I agree if Albertonman but I feel the shadows are fine. 16 year old photography and videography enthusiast.
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pelooyen Goldmember  2,940 posts Likes: 86 Joined Mar 2010 Location: Sydney More info | Feb 19, 2011 04:03 | #4 I like the eery feel and the unsaturated look suits it. cheers, Paul
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Feb 19, 2011 08:07 | #5 Nice emotional content, I really like this picture. Perhaps a touch blown out, but the effect works. Shadows could be a bit too dark, but they work with the processing. Did you, by chance, take a portrait version -- could be better with this tighter crop or it could create (2) subjects in the photo instead of (1) and be a distraction. X100T XT3
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thinkjasonacton THREAD STARTER Junior Member 25 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Dallas, Tx More info | Feb 19, 2011 10:50 | #6 GlimmerMan wrote in post #11872843  could be better with this tighter crop or it could create (2) subjects in the photo instead of (1) and be a distraction. Thats what I was afraid of, I really wanted her to be the main focus. Let me post a non blown out and toned down shadow version. I did it on purpose Nightlife | Editorial | Lifestyle | Events
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thinkjasonacton THREAD STARTER Junior Member 25 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Dallas, Tx More info | Feb 19, 2011 11:04 | #7 So i changed the levels to fix the shadows everyone was talking about. I personally liked it being blown out, I should have tried to do it in post but it was shot to be blown out a little.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Nightlife | Editorial | Lifestyle | Events
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Feb 20, 2011 09:10 | #9 I like it; but I think you want "Mourning the Dead". -- Image Editing OK --
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HazYleaF Member  84 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Connecticut More info | Feb 20, 2011 11:50 | #10 I love the shot, ThinkJAson...Wicked.... but I would have to agree that stepping back, maybe about 5 paces, would have captured, your idea, and she still would have been the focus, the viewers eyes, would've still been drawn to her,seeing as she would be the only living person, surrounded by the deceased.... excellent post too. Man with a Camera and Lens
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crimsonblack Goldmember  2,052 posts Likes: 6 Joined Feb 2010 Location: Las Vegas, Nevada More info | Feb 20, 2011 20:12 | #11 I really like the composition. for me the image would be better a bit... darker and more contrasty. Definitely a great image. | 7D Gripped | 28-135 f/3.5-4.6 | 50 f/1.8 || --- Sony F717 digital (infrared) --- Bunch of Film Stuff:- | Nikon & Nikkormat | 50/28/70-150/400 | B & J 4x5 large format | Mamiya C220 |
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thinkjasonacton THREAD STARTER Junior Member 25 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Dallas, Tx More info | Feb 22, 2011 12:46 | #12 I shot it early morning, my title really means nothing.. notice the " , " Nightlife | Editorial | Lifestyle | Events
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thinkjasonacton THREAD STARTER Junior Member 25 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2010 Location: Dallas, Tx More info | Feb 22, 2011 12:48 | #13 it was a stupid pun sorry haha! Nightlife | Editorial | Lifestyle | Events
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HazYleaF Member 84 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Connecticut More info | Feb 22, 2011 16:04 | #14 thinkjasonacton wrote in post #11892643 it was a stupid pun sorry haha! Don't worry I got it... time of day+place... separate, but a play on words... happens to me, where the pun sometimes doesn't come across very well. Man with a Camera and Lens
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DanTheDealman Hatchling 4 posts Joined Dec 2010 More info | Feb 22, 2011 16:15 | #15 I love the concept! I would have titled it "Mourning in the AM" to convey the pun
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