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Small Islet off coast of French Beach

 
grislybear5
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Apr 21, 2003 22:34 |  #1

Hi

This is a small islet off coast of French Beach, Vancouver Island. Apart from fading frame I have not touched this photo.

http://www.pbase.com/i​mage/15742576 (external link)

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bigdave
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Apr 22, 2003 00:48 |  #2

I really like this one, the position of the islet is different and I enjoy the composition in general. Beautiful work!




  
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eland
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Apr 22, 2003 04:38 |  #3

Another pleasant image. You have a good eye for composition.

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henkbos
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Apr 22, 2003 05:25 |  #4

Grisly,

A few suggestions:
- try flipping the picture. A line going from left to right is in general more appealin gto the human eye
- the colors seem to be a little washed out. YOu might want to increase the saturation a little
- I would try to bring out more color in the sky

Compo: great.




  
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grislybear5
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Apr 22, 2003 20:29 |  #5

Henk - I am not sure what you mean by "A line going from left to right". Kindly clarify and then I will try to touch the image as you suggested, and see what the impression is. Thanks for your comments.

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henkbos
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Apr 23, 2003 00:03 |  #6

According to reseach (whatever that is) a picture seems more pleasing if lines move from the left bottom to the right top instead of vice versa.
Give it a try. Show the 2 pics to a person that doesn't know the original scene and ask what the best pic is!




  
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grislybear5
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Apr 23, 2003 10:00 |  #7

Cool. I will try this and post here as well. Thanks.

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