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Mar 09, 2011 09:19 |  #1

Hello guys. I had a shoot yesterday, I still think i'm making errors, I think I keep messing up with the lighting. What do you guys think?

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Mar 09, 2011 11:13 |  #2

Lighting.

Image 1. The red gel on the background spilled onto her buns and back arm making them red. Either you didn't use a hair light or it needs to be powered up as her hair is quite dark. I suggest having her suck in her tummy, then relax 25% and then take the shot. This will lift and enlarge the breasts and flatten the tummy all at the same time. The lighting on her face is good.

Image 2. Kicker is too hot and her hair is everywhere. Pose and cropping are so so. Lighting on her face is good.

Image 3. Her nose is hot and large. Feather the overhead light and use a longer lens.

Image 4. Lighting is good but the tip of her nose looks bulbous. A 100mm lens or longer should make it appear more like normal.

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Mar 09, 2011 11:17 |  #3

Benji wrote in post #11987818 (external link)
Lighting.

Image 1. The red gel on the background spilled onto her buns and back arm making them red. Either you didn't use a hair light or it needs to be powered up as her hair is quite dark. I suggest having her suck in her tummy, then relax 25% and then take the shot. This will lift and enlarge the breasts and flatten the tummy all at the same time. The lighting on her face is good.

Image 2. Kicker is too hot and her hair is everywhere. Pose and cropping are so so. Lighting on her face is good.

Image 3. Her nose is hot and large. Feather the overhead light and use a longer lens.

Image 4. Lighting is good but the tip of her nose looks bulbous. A 100mm lens or longer should make it appear more like normal.

Benji

Did I mention i'm doing this in my living room, it's pretty small lol.

Thanks for the tips Benji, I will work on this. I'm sure it will help with the next shoot on sunday.


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Mar 09, 2011 15:38 |  #4

Lovin the last 2!! ;)

She has a kinda bored look on her face in the 1st 2.. Or maybe just nervous in front of camera?


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