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Mar 11, 2011 15:51 |  #1

First try at food photography.

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Mar 11, 2011 16:35 |  #2

I think had the foreground been in focus instead of the center, my eye would have travelled nicely, this way, it stops at the front end of the pizza?


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Mar 11, 2011 16:37 |  #3

If your goal was to get one row of pepperoni, you almost did it. The focus appears to be sharpest in between the second and third rows. If you wanted to get the whole pie, you need a smaller aperture, which probably means that you also need a tripod.


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Mar 11, 2011 16:40 |  #4

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I think had the foreground been in focus instead of the center, my eye would have travelled nicely, this way, it stops at the front end of the pizza?

Thanks for your input, I'll keep that in mind next time. I think I got too focused on the pepperoni and stopped thinking about the whole pie.


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Mar 11, 2011 16:40 |  #5

ShaneKPhotography wrote in post #12003366 (external link)
Thanks for your input, I'll keep that in mind next time. I think I got too focused on the pepperoni and stopped thinking about the whole pie.

Easily done when one is around pizza~:D


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Mar 11, 2011 17:11 |  #6

This is a weird pizza. Did you make it yourself? Why is there only pepperoni in the middle...?

I like the narrow focus though. The pizza looks delicious :)


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Mar 11, 2011 19:49 |  #7

seems like the aperture was very high? though the pie looks very tasty!!

ps - the cat tails pic on flickr has excellent colors with nice contract


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Mar 11, 2011 19:52 |  #8

I like it. BUT .... lol. Im thinking you could have turned the pizza so that piece of pepperoni in the back that is near the edge, could be on the front, then moved your focus more to the front. Let the mostly bread part be in the back and out of focus a bit.




  
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Mar 11, 2011 21:30 |  #9

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ps - the cat tails pic on flickr has excellent colors with nice contract

Thank you :)

Thanks everyone. I appreciate the critiques.


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