Reading.....

i like the idea, i think it would have been cool if this were the actual page from the book she was reading. good job

I like the idea. Think it would've worked better with a black background or just possibly a different setting but thats just me. Very cool idea tho

Hey you're welcome!
I do agree with the above. A page from a book she is reading(I tried that....so hard..guess I could've scanned it...hmm), and maybe a less busy background. But nice. (:

Is this better?

surgeonhawkeye wrote in post #12092982
Is this better?

Umm...
well I guess you have to ask yourself: what is my main subject?
In this one, it seems to be more of the script rather than the girl.