I think you need to dial back on the processing a bit. It's very easy to get carried away and not know when to stop... until you either smell the coffee or someone tells you.
The highlights in post #13 are overcooked and the hair looks completely dried out as a result of the processing. Again, her shoulders are squared in this, which looks boyish and unflattering to me.
Regarding the white balance, are you shooting in RAW or JPEG?

Or maybe I'm looking at this too negatively?
