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Mar 25, 2011 03:56 | #1

Hello all.

This is my first post here ever,been a member for some time and been enjoying all the good pictures people are posting here. Now I feel I have a good picture to share with you all. C & C always welcome.

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Mar 25, 2011 04:03 | #2

Hi tom, nice first post.

2 things though, it looks just a tad dark to me and her right hand looks deformed in that pose and with the bangle high up on her wrist.

Good effort though and a belated welcome to the forum to you!

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jerefish

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Mar 25, 2011 07:21 | #3

It is good but like stated above too dark...also you can see the umbrella light in the jewelry.

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Mar 25, 2011 07:52 | #6

The composition is good and model beautiful, but the white balance bugs me. This photo would love great in black and white, with a little bit of tweaking to lighten up the shadows.

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Mar 25, 2011 13:48 | #7

You are underexposed. The left arm looks....weird. The reflections in the band are really distracting. The composition is spot on though!

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Mar 25, 2011 15:09 as a reply to @ frederiksenp's post | #8

Thanks for all the good feedback,I will take it with me further in my photographic work.

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