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Mar 27, 2011 15:55 |  #1

How do you capture the majesty of this scene? Appreciate some pointers on how to take 'em up a notch. They feel like they're missing a subject to me, or is it the composition. Examples welcome!

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Mar 27, 2011 16:04 |  #2

I think a different angle would look better. The composition on 1 just doesn't seem as interesting. The angle on 2 and 3 were better. 2 seems to be lacking a subject and the sky is blown out. 3 would have been better if there was a specific subject, or even if your used different dof. The foreground oof is distracting to me. The line where the flowers stop and trees start does not appear to be in a good place in the frame on either pic 2 or 3. Try taking a stepladder out and shooting down or at angle so that you only see the field of flowers, or try it late in evening when it has some directional light.


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Mar 27, 2011 17:21 |  #3

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Mar 27, 2011 17:36 |  #4

Compositional, IMO. These look like you were standing and just shooting across the field; since that is the angle that we normally see things from, it sort of lacks impact. Try kneeling, or even lying down and shooting more "across" or "eye level" with the flowers themselves; or, getting up higher, as SmilingFox mentioned.

Also, consider a different framing; below the level of the flowers, looking up - get them backlit - isolate a thick patch, etc.


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Mar 27, 2011 17:43 |  #5

SmilingFox wrote in post #12103921 (external link)
I think a different angle would look better..... Try taking a stepladder out and shooting down or at angle so that you only see the field of flowers, or try it late in evening when it has some directional light.

Great comment, and thanks for the idea. I've got one in the closet that might work.

Have you got any to share yet? I took a drive to LaGrange yesterday and it looks like we need another week or two, along with some rain in-between, for the blue bonnets to burst.

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Compositional, IMO. ....below the level of the flowers, looking up - get them backlit....

10-4. We've got a patch of Spider Lilies down the road that should explode in the viewfinder with this perspective. (edit: actually Live View so I don't blow my retinas out my ears.)


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Mar 27, 2011 19:44 |  #6

Our bluebonnets are starting to come up, but not in great numbers yet. Very very soon though, I imagine.


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Mar 27, 2011 23:20 |  #7

SmilingFox wrote in post #12104961 (external link)
Our bluebonnets are starting to come up, but not in great numbers yet. Very very soon though, I imagine.


With the lack of water down here, it wont be a very good year for the wildflower photos.:cry:

So far the only flowers I have photos of were in an area ZOO.


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Mar 27, 2011 23:42 |  #8

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So far the only flowers I have photos of were in an area ZOO.

Haha.


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Mar 28, 2011 00:23 |  #9

Flowers so far here..click.. (external link) <-- No kiddin either.

There are a few flowers on the roadside here, but I dont think its going to be much this year and wont bother with any pictures :(


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Mar 28, 2011 00:25 |  #10

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How do you capture the majesty of this scene? Appreciate some pointers on how to take 'em up a notch. They feel like they're missing a subject to me, or is it the composition. Examples welcome!

1. F4 @ 1/640 // A-DEP Mode // 24 mm // Tiffen CPF // ~3:00 pm and windy


2. F22 @ 1/100 // A-DEP Mode // 67 mm // Tiffen CPF // ~3:00 pm and windy


3. F8 @ 1/125 // A-DEP Mode // 105 mm // Tiffen CPF // ~3:00 pm and windy


I like the 2nd and third one as there is less sky. The sky is pretty mundane here. I would have concentrated on the flowers and green stuff.


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Mar 28, 2011 07:01 |  #11

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I like the 2nd and third one as there is less sky. The sky is pretty mundane here. I would have concentrated on the flowers and green stuff.

Thanks JTX. I liked the flowers and that's a great example of picking a strong viewing angle to isolate your subject... although, I've gotta say that 0010 with the mohawk takes-the-cake for me.


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Mar 28, 2011 08:17 |  #12

1. have the camera more on the field and not so much on the sky. It's a sky, nothing exciting going on.
3. would look better if your focus was in the foreground.


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Mar 28, 2011 10:05 |  #13

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Thanks JTX. I liked the flowers and that's a great example of picking a strong viewing angle to isolate your subject... although, I've gotta say that 0010 with the mohawk takes-the-cake for me.

Thanks.

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