Melina

technicaly all look good to me. nice colors
second and third are keepers for me

I like the last three, but In the first shot there are several problems. Her neck cord is extremely distended, her left arm muscles are bulging, the skin on her left upper shoulder and right arm are brighter than her face is and the armpit looks bad. Also her expression isn't good and the wristwatch is overpowering. On the plus side her clothing is not wrinkled, her hair is nicely positioned and I like the old wooden wall behind her. This would be a great background for a cowgirl or a farmer's daughter! Be careful cropping at any joint.

Benji

Melina was my "lighting assistant" for an engagement session we did. The couple was a little late and so, without any real preparation, I put Melina on the spot and took some pictures of her.

it was extremely windy and cold (and she's up from Brazil, only been here a couple of days). I think she did great in the short time we had.